Update from Rick Segeberg <landude@comcast.net>

(This used to be commit af4fa1aea6bc69d56da88c83968561f0fac1f3a4)

diff --git a/docs/docbook/projdoc/DOMAIN_MEMBER.sgml b/docs/docbook/projdoc/DOMAIN_MEMBER.sgml
index 9470688089460099074d2528541c77ecf4c8f406..335e5cc7db6e64b5dd72fa2d8f2ad501e248ab93 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/docbook/projdoc/DOMAIN_MEMBER.sgml
+++ b/docs/docbook/projdoc/DOMAIN_MEMBER.sgml
@@ -12,15 +12,18 @@
 <sect1>
 
        <title>Joining an NT Domain with Samba 3.0</title>
+<!--changed by RS: IMHO, this would read better and be easier to reference as a listrather than written out in paragraph form-->
+       <para>
+       <variablelist>
+       <varlistentry><term>"Assumptions:"</term>
+       <listitem>NetBIOS name: <constant>SERV1</constant></listitem>
+       <listitem>Win2K/NT domain name: <constant>DOM</constant></listitem>
+       <listitem>Domain's PDC NetBIOS name: <constant>DOMPDC</constant></listitem>
+       <listitem>Domain's BDC NetBIOS names: <constant>DOMBDC1</constant> and <constant>DOMBDC2</constant></listitem>
+       </variablelist>
+       </para>
 
-       <para>Assume you have a Samba 3.0 server with a NetBIOS name of 
-       <constant>SERV1</constant> and are joining a Win2k or NT domain called
-       <constant>DOM</constant>, which has a PDC with a NetBIOS name
-       of <constant>DOMPDC</constant> and two backup domain controllers 
-       with NetBIOS names <constant>DOMBDC1</constant> and <constant>DOMBDC2
-       </constant>.</para>
-
-       <para>Firstly, you must edit your &smb.conf; file to tell Samba it should
+       <para>First, you must edit your &smb.conf; file to tell Samba it should
        now use domain security.</para>
        
        <para>Change (or add) your <ulink url="smb.conf.5.html#SECURITY">
@@ -83,7 +86,7 @@
        <para>in your terminal window. See the <ulink url="net.8.html">
        net(8)</ulink> man page for more details.</para>
        
-       <para>This process joins the server to thedomain
+       <para>This process joins the server to the domain
        without having to create the machine trust account on the PDC
        beforehand.</para>
 
@@ -129,7 +132,7 @@
        means Samba servers now participate in domain trust relationships in 
        exactly the same way NT servers do (i.e., you can add Samba servers into 
        a resource domain and have the authentication passed on from a resource
-       domain PDC to an account domain PDC.</para>
+       domain PDC to an account domain PDC).</para>
 
        <para>In addition, with <command>security = server</command> every Samba 
        daemon on a server has to keep a connection open to the